Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Malala Yousafzai

Kiwi Kids News
Read the whole article and record the key words or phrases that answer the following questions.

News Article Headline
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Malala Yousafzai
She had been nominated for the noble peace prize
She is from Pakistan but is living in England at the moment.



Rewrite the article in your own words

Malala Yousafzai nominated for the noble peace prize

Malala had just been nominated for the global peace prize. She moved to England away from the awful event that happened in pakistan, Even though she got shot she still is fighting for Her life. She is significant because she was fighting for girls education in pakistan.  

Opinion and Why:
What do you think about this news and why
I think that the Malala is a good inspiration and that all the pakistani girls are lucky enough to be able to have someone that could stand up for their rights instead of listening to others and being their slaves.

What are some questions this article has prompted tat you may like to find out the answers to
I would like to know:
How Education goes around in pakistan,
How malala survived the awful event,
and how the girls are treated and how they feel?


Monday, October 21, 2013


Halloween was originated in the early Middle Ages as a Catholic vigil observed on the eve of All Saints Day, November 1.  November 1 2011 People believed that some Halloween traditions have been from an ancient Celtic festival called Samhain which was  Christianised by Churches from a long time a go.

People celebrate Halloween by making big parties or going to peoples house to get treats. Some kids go and prank people or dress up in silly costumes. All the saints and west christians celebrate it by worshipping someone called samhain because he would put spirits into people with black magic.

A lot of countries have celebrated this holiday, Japan and England are some of the countries. China celebrate a Festival of the Hungry Ghosts. It is the less celebrated, it is an opportunity to give gifts to spirits of the dead to provide comfort and scare them off.  
it doesn't say was year Halloween started. A lot of kids love celebrating Halloween. Halloween can sometimes be celebrated in secret groups that are unknown.

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Instructions/Sample Beach! Draft 1

We Just arrived at the beach, “Let Me Go”, I screamed as my cousins left me out of the car and threw me in to the beach. My tears sprinkled down my face as I got ready to get revenge. As Stanton got ready to dive I pushed him into the water when suddenly he grabbed  hold of my arm and tightly hugged me as we both got thrown into the beach."HA-HA", Stanton stood and laughed at me. I leaped into the air and landed on his back like a frog, his mouth opened wide like a lion, and that's when we had a wrestling Competition in the Water.

“Ouch!”, Something flew from the sky and landed on my head, My face almost blew up.  A lump began to grow. “Pass the Ball and Play Man”!, My friends yelled. We both zoomed like lighting a crossed to them, Their eyes open like they were aliens. They had no idea we were fast. “Lets Play”.

Stanton sprinted trying to get a try, “BOOM!” he fell to the ground, His hands covered his face, he looked like a baby unborn. I laughed and laughed until I realized I was acting rood my cousin was hurt and I didn't help. Unfinished Sorry

ADD: More similes, Verbs, And I need to do better hooks, Make sense.