In the holidays I went to my cousins wedding. It was boring because it took for long. My sister sisilia keeped on sleeping and my best friend magnolia came too. After that I went out side with magnolia and we played hide and go seek with my other cousins. when all the talking was finish in the church I went to help put the food on the table and it smelt yummy.
Hi Sesalina,
ReplyDeletecongratulation to your cousins wedding. It was romantic of your cousin's parents getting married. I think you should put more writing in your story. So the audience knows what you are really talking about but you have a lovely story.
From Maru.
Hi
ReplyDeletewhat you said sound yummy I went to a wedding but it wasted my sister who went to sleep it was my aunty who went to sleep it was so fun at the wedding I can still rember the first time I went to a wedding.