Dashing down the stairs, tying her long hair in a ponytail. Crystal ran in the car and slammed the door shut. Strangely the car stopped, she was curious. “Ahhh” She shouted, as she got thrown out of the vehicle. She looked around and a lot of ugly faces was rushing to her like she was famous. “MOM”! Crystal cried running to the car when it suddenly drove of. She knew she had to escape before these scary people get her. Crystal ran into a rusty house nearby, nobody was home, it was clean and warm so she stayed for safety.
Hey Sesalina
ReplyDeleteYour story had me on the edge of my seat, I'd be curious to find out what happens next. Does Crystal make it out ok?
Keep it up, Mr. Hutchings